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The writing was decent and only a handful of editing issues if that bothers you

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I also really enjoyed that while the book leaves more story to be told and is listed as hundred kingdoms book 1 youre not left with a part of the story

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The emotions in battle spire are nothing to sulk at jack is a fully developed character through and through

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Well written great character growth and while i found there to be a bit too much emphasis on rpg skillstat numbers it wasn’t unbalanced enough to negatively impact the story

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Basing things on wow makes sense for a story about an mmo and while it detracted for me it didn’t affect how well the story was written or my desire to read the rest of the author’s work

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More by circumstance and loophole exploitation then anything else

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Hes no badass john mcclain facing off against a group of inept villains

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Not mindlessly explained with game logic every time there would be a plot hole